In my Gods Among us piece my Genre was an artice and review, my Audience was prefferably males but females too who watch films and are up to date with the film industry.My Purpose was to entertain with the secondary purposes to perswade and argue.
In my piece i used a variety of techniques which the original artical had used, I used the metaphor "pushing the other competition of the bench", this is a metaphorical indirect allusion, it references Forrest Gump.In which Tom Hanks won best actor.I feel this is effective as a technique as it allows a relation from writer to audience on which is based on common knowlage ground.The metaphor used in the original piece however was used for a different purpose, "already a blazing star". This is used as a perswasive technique to imply greatness.
whilst writing this commentary I have released that i should have focused more on the techniques to borrow form my style model as when i have gone back and compared the two they have very little similarities, this is defiantly something i need to improve on to get a good grade.Most of the techniques i have used are ones i did naturally and this is why writing my momentary is very difficult.
Sunday, 12 October 2014
Monday, 6 October 2014
Gods Among Us
Gods Among Us #8 :Hanks(over a large picture of Tom Hanks)
The boy next door appeal that captivated the nation and made Tom Hanks and his torso fly to fame.By Esme Rees
During an interview, Tom Hanks projected to his fan base that his greatest struggle whilst starting his career was being a solo parent and having to provide for his children whilst trying to make ends meet – This is compelling for two reasons. The first is that its almost un-imaginable that Tom Hanks was once a nobody trying to push his acting career and get the break he needed, like many of his fans Tom lead a relatively 'normal' life, if unchallenged, he would of not been capable to stretch and reach for the luxuries he has adjusted to now.
The second is truly abstract. International Tom Hanks day, I kid you not,from humble beginnings this day has grown to a phenomenon with 100% of the proceeds going to support Lifeline Energy: it happens on the 28th of March every year, the life player mp3, allows on demand educational access to vulnerable populations. The kind gesture, he is informed, is not always welcome. And in some cultures,dismissed. Truth is we will never be put into the situations these people are forced into at birth.'so, we can choose either to approach our fellow human beings with suspicion or to approach them with and open mind, a dash of optimism and a great deal of candour'. Tom won an oscar for best actor in Forrest Gump which he proved his excellence by taking on the role with absolute brilliance pushing the other competition off the bench.
In the 1980s Hank proved his comedic values in the cross dressing sitcom Bosom Buddies,Kip Wilson(Hanks) is officially skeptical of the plan to move into a woman's only affordable institute but soon after meeting a stunning fellow resident he ends up convincing an aspiring writer that it would be a intriguing plot to a book. I would list some of his best acting performances of all time however Hanks is an actor who rarely slips up and therefore this is easier said than done.Hanks has been excellent in every film he has acted in, possibly The Green Mile most of all and fellow actor De Niro has embarrassed himself in the last decade or so, other rival Al Pacino arguably out performs De Niro however in comparison to Hanks who has the ability to develop and adapt his acting skills suitably to each and every scene and context we see a clear winner.
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The boy next door appeal that captivated the nation and made Tom Hanks and his torso fly to fame.By Esme Rees
During an interview, Tom Hanks projected to his fan base that his greatest struggle whilst starting his career was being a solo parent and having to provide for his children whilst trying to make ends meet – This is compelling for two reasons. The first is that its almost un-imaginable that Tom Hanks was once a nobody trying to push his acting career and get the break he needed, like many of his fans Tom lead a relatively 'normal' life, if unchallenged, he would of not been capable to stretch and reach for the luxuries he has adjusted to now.
The second is truly abstract. International Tom Hanks day, I kid you not,from humble beginnings this day has grown to a phenomenon with 100% of the proceeds going to support Lifeline Energy: it happens on the 28th of March every year, the life player mp3, allows on demand educational access to vulnerable populations. The kind gesture, he is informed, is not always welcome. And in some cultures,dismissed. Truth is we will never be put into the situations these people are forced into at birth.'so, we can choose either to approach our fellow human beings with suspicion or to approach them with and open mind, a dash of optimism and a great deal of candour'. Tom won an oscar for best actor in Forrest Gump which he proved his excellence by taking on the role with absolute brilliance pushing the other competition off the bench.
In the 1980s Hank proved his comedic values in the cross dressing sitcom Bosom Buddies,Kip Wilson(Hanks) is officially skeptical of the plan to move into a woman's only affordable institute but soon after meeting a stunning fellow resident he ends up convincing an aspiring writer that it would be a intriguing plot to a book. I would list some of his best acting performances of all time however Hanks is an actor who rarely slips up and therefore this is easier said than done.Hanks has been excellent in every film he has acted in, possibly The Green Mile most of all and fellow actor De Niro has embarrassed himself in the last decade or so, other rival Al Pacino arguably out performs De Niro however in comparison to Hanks who has the ability to develop and adapt his acting skills suitably to each and every scene and context we see a clear winner.
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Sunday, 5 October 2014
Using Charlie Brooker's article as a style model
theguardian
Unable to sleep at night?The skys the limit
I was trying to fall asleep the other night and then it hit me it was as easy as one, two, three
Esme Rees
The Guardian, Wednesday 30 January 2014 20.00 BST
I couldn't get the days events off my brain as I hit the pillow this evening,
I remember my Mum telling me to count sheep but at this point I was past the boring fluffy cloud like creatures and decided on something more adventurous.The only animal I could thing of was a dolphin, by the time I had decided this mediocre technique was about as useful as a bird with no wings, I had counted 58 dolphins. I tried listening to music, i swapped through 10 music stations. From Kiss 101 to Ujjima all the music was to upbeat and jumpy. I finally found a channel that was playing The book of love by Peter Gabriel, his angelic voice smashed against my eardrums allowing me the bliss of selective hearing to which i was finally able to relax.
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